A Grief Observed Poem by James A Tweedie

A Grief Observed

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Turgid the sea as it billows and foams in the face of the tempest
Wind-lifted wave-crests explode into diamonds agleam in the sunlight
Surf-spray erupts atop surge-curled water descending in free fall
Sweeping the beach leaving smooth-glistened sand in the wake of its ebbing

Lonely I stand with my back to the shore and my face to the ocean
Turgid my soul as the tide sucks the sand out from under my bare feet
Broken I bow to the baptismal mist which embraces my sorrow
Tears wicked away by the bone-chilling blast of the winter storm's fury

Weary I rise with a whispered farewell to the one who once loved me
Grief undenied yet consoled by the pow'r of the tempest's caresses
Slowly I turn with the incessant roar of the sea now behind me
Walking the beach-path that leads to our home where my family awaits me

Monday, August 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beach,farewell,grief,loneliness,ocean,sea,sorrow
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written in dactylic hexameter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 06 August 2018

Well thought out and elegantly brought forth from the heart. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing James and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 06 August 2018

Write comment. Great start, James. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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