A Hope Poem by Roshni Parekh

A Hope

Rating: 5.0


Forever we remain oblivious to the Future,
Lost to the past, and enduring our Torture,
Forever we take chances, to settle our Scores,
Loosing some battles and Winning some Wars,
Forever praying out loud,
Hoping someone will hear, forever crying,
Softly but never shedding a tear,
Forever exists behind a disguise,
But the belief in forever,
Keeps our hearts Alive...
- Poet Roshni Parekh

Saturday, June 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: battles,hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harshit Sheth 30 June 2018

The way she has described things have literally inspired me in a very optimystic manner

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Rajesh chauhan 11 August 2018

The poem is such a fantastic forever we remain oblivous to future your poem will be forever fanta

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sindhu chauhan 28 July 2018

the poem is fablous you had written the truth in the poem your poem is excellent

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Indira Renganathan 01 July 2018

Forever this poem will stay super and will be appreciated...simple yet thoughtful, meaningful and truthful poem Kudos Roshni

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Chinedu Dike 30 June 2018

Well conceived and elegantly brought forth in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing Roshni and do remain enriched.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 June 2018

Welcome to PoemHunter! You have brilliantly expressed your views. Loosing some battles and Winning some Wars, these both sequences amaze mind. Sometimes we cry and sometimes we get joy. Hope is associated with life. Soft mind still carries faith. An interesting and brilliant poem is beautifully presented...10

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