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Rating: 2.9

Panacea
Nuke-b on the world’s neck
Holy hedonist yawns
Weeping ice caps, a hot topic
Smiling sea’s belly swelling

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Sandra Fowler 03 November 2007

A poem that needed to be written. We should all be more aware of what is happening to our beautiful world. Thank you, Raveendran. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 02 November 2007

The devastating reality of global warming explained economically and chillingly. Excellent poetry. love, Allie xxxx

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Raj Arumugam 25 November 2008

compact, neat and intense

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James Jason Dye 01 August 2008

Nice write... pretty creative and says a lot more then at first appears.

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Subbaraman N V 18 June 2008

A great response to the topic of the day!

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Love the image you come up with here, especially a smiling sea's smiling belly.

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Uloia Norris Moore 05 November 2007

As the belly so swells unceasing weeping can't stop for once all were one now we are seven matters not about heaven. But will strength of unity.

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