! ! ! A Very Indian Valentine Poem Poem by Raveendran N.V.

! ! ! A Very Indian Valentine Poem

Rating: 3.0

Honey bun,
Cold blooded sweetheart,
The time I spent admiring you
Was a casualty unproductive.
I could better have gone
Harvesting rain water
Or worse, tobacco;
Yet, I burnt out many an hour
Conceiving you
And contemplating happiness:
What an abhorrent waste!
Now to me you are but some
Rainless bankruptcy
Let your glamour go to the geese-
A flower is sweetly deodorant
And softly warming if it rains
Although short-lived
Like you.

Mary Gordley 13 February 2008

I think it would work for a lot of relationships in my country as well. Thanks it was fun to read for being so unique.

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Subbaraman N V 18 June 2008

Absolutely great and true!

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Abha Sharma 20 March 2008

Many sould learn from your gesture.... Truly expressed...

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Marvin Brato 04 March 2008

'Cold blooded sweetheart! ' I agreed with Sandra. A 10.

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Alison Cassidy 13 February 2008

'Let your glamor go to the geese' is priceless - the title is perfect and the 'over the top', Bollywood style of this melodrama is most appealing. You're right - a very Indian Valentine Poem. Superb. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 13 February 2008

I give you ten for your originality. Excellent satire, Raveendran. Warmest regards, Sandra

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