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A Humorous Death

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Distance stretches
to the horizon,
over the edge
is the distance down.
I am over
Falling slow as a feather.

My past passes me,
painfully.
It is a long way,
the bottom.
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Walterrean Salley 08 June 2021
So clever written, Sally P.Plum
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Sally P. P. 20 May 2020
Hi, Ramesh, glad you enjoyed my stuff. x
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Richard Wlodarski 11 November 2019
Sally, the title of this moment had immediately caught mine attention. I was very curious to see where you would be going with the humour. You've done an outstanding job! In my near death experience, I had the joy and honour of experiencing humour. And it had come from a truly unexpectable source! Thanks for sharing.
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Sally P. P. 15 January 2020
Thank you, Richard, for your your very lovely comment. It was much appreciated.
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Prabir Gayen 12 May 2019
Very beautiful poem dear poet...... thanks////////
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Sally P. P. 29 May 2019
Thank you for your lovely remark. Sally
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Julia Luber 13 March 2019
Your poems are Profoundly sophisticated. I am impressed at your " education" too- or lack thereof. I myself, though 'educated' have found the most powerful education through that of life though it be more difficult, and one one may need a break from in a University sometimes.
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Sally P. P. 19 January 2020
I am familiar with street life.That helps.
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Sally P. P. 05 February 2019
Thankyou for all of your remarks I’ve taken them on board. Lovely to hear from you.(Is that correct?) Best Regards Sally.
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Bri Edwards 19 September 2018
OH, YEAH, VERY NICE puncuation! such is to be EXPECTED on a POEM site, isn't it? but it AIN'T always so! ! ! i wish i could SEE the punctuation more easily; that one reason i enlarge the poem on this screen. bri :)
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Sally P.P. 25 March 2019
Hi! Bri, I love your remarks. I assume you’re Welsh.Philip Madoc was one of my favourite men.. Cheers for now. Sally.
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Bri Edwards 19 September 2018
(CONT.) Sally, i plan to use this in my upcoming October showcase, where will appear the poem title & text, and your name (3 times!) . any questions? showcases almost always have the month and year in the title. Thanks. bri ;)
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Sally Plumb Plumb 26 March 2019
What is a ‘showcase? ’ I am interested How old are you? SallyP.P.
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Bri Edwards 19 September 2018
ok, i read it AGAIN. In the mortuary of mind lay my ancestors... i wondered if lay was correct. i want to say lie, but the tenses of to lie and to lay are even confusing for me i guess (some of them) . i guess the problem is i'm not SURE if you want past or present tense. [i GUESS! ] I LIKE the m/m alliteration. (CONT.)
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Sally P. P. 21 April 2020
Sort the problem out for me, Bri, It’s beyond me. Thanks anyway.x.
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Sally P. P. 21 April 2020
Sort the problem out for me, Bri, it’s beyond me. Thanks anyway.x
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Bri Edwards 19 September 2018
i came back for another peek, and something seemed amiss. en·tire·ty en'ti(?) rte, en'tir?de/ noun noun: entirety; plural noun: entireties the whole of something. of course, being from England, you may not know any better! bri :)
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Sally P. P. 20 May 2020
Thanks for sorting me, Bri.
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