A Hunting Poem by anais vionet

A Hunting



Ignore the roses' glory lass -
for this purpose you were born!
Virgin princess - you are needed
to catch the elusive unicorn!

I stumble as if to music -
for I know the sordid truth.
That abstract love burns brightly -
in the hearts of maiden youth.

I'm a secretly broken angel -
so this magic I can't perform.
I was seduced by boyish powers -
by clownish fumbling I was transformed.

I've been avoiding hateful mirrors -
for unwelcome truths they seem to know.
I can but join this dull adventure
and a hunting we will go.'

Monday, July 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: humor,hunting,teen,unicorns,virginity
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a love poem - to unicorns everywhere
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael R. Burch 20 July 2020

I like your poem. I left comments and suggestions elsewhere. I think you are misinterpreting the mirror. Don't let the clowns win by giving them power over you. Take the power and reverse it, as battygirl and other ninjas would. Does battygirl let the Joker tell her who she is and how to feel about herself? Or does she toss the clown into a prison cell and throw away the key?

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