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A Journey That Continues - Poem by SALINI NAIR

This way looks so consistent
Turn is not visible and looks polished
Flair of journey masked it for a while
A jostle can expect anyway
Liberal montages are inside
Started with a haste and fervor
But fluke was ephemeral in that way
The cobble is spread here and there
Turn was not visible with some fog
Slump to pit and heard a pink
Rest is not prim in their way
Riot on way was so rude
Fear ruined spell in a strange way
Life is like a travel itself
A voyage of known to unknown….

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Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about A Journey That Continues by SALINI NAIR

  • (10/17/2014 3:40:00 AM)

    Very insightful and it's a fact that life is a journey full of turns and pits and full of thorns and roses.......beautifully
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  • (5/21/2014 10:25:00 AM)

    The end result of the life is clearly pin pointed in beautiful poem which is somewhat philosophical and somewhat reality in real life situations. A beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2014 8:35:00 AM)

    life is like a journey....where need to meet turns and and pits.......................... (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2014 8:23:00 AM)

    life is like a travel where met with many turns and pits............ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 14, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 23, 2014

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