A Journey That Continues Poem by SALINI NAIR

A Journey That Continues

Rating: 4.5


This way looks so consistent
Turn is not visible and looks polished
Flair of journey masked it for a while
A jostle can expect anyway
Liberal montages are inside
Started with a haste and fervor
But fluke was ephemeral in that way
The cobble is spread here and there
Turn was not visible with some fog
Slump to pit and heard a pink
Rest is not prim in their way
Riot on way was so rude
Fear ruined spell in a strange way
Life is like a travel itself
A voyage of known to unknown….

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Friday, February 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 17 October 2014

Very insightful and it's a fact that life is a journey full of turns and pits and full of thorns and roses.......beautifully crafted

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The end result of the life is clearly pin pointed in beautiful poem which is somewhat philosophical and somewhat reality in real life situations. A beautiful poem.

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Salini Nair 13 April 2014

life is like a journey....where need to meet turns and and pits..........................

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Salini Nair 13 April 2014

life is like a travel where met with many turns and pits............

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