A Journey Through The Awkward Seas! Poem by Surayya Abbas

A Journey Through The Awkward Seas!

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Life is not secure
With tragedies
And miseries
All around
Yet, difficulties
Can be sought out
With internal wisdom
And beauty
So pure
So bright.

The missing links
Make the innards co-ordinate
With brain
And all customise
In right direction
To sail through the awkward seas
In coracle of reverie.




3/17/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Teo 03 April 2009

'To sail through the awkward seas In coracle of reverie.' I liked that (: Awesome usage of words.

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Bob Blackwell 29 March 2009

We must always do what is right, but it helps if we realise that everything changes given time. A thoughtful and well writtten poem

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Sharon Ogwel 25 March 2009

spot on and very insightful.

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James B. Earley 24 March 2009

An analytical view of life's complexity! Excellent rendition.

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Estrella Baldemosa 22 March 2009

enlightening...thank you

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Sandra Fowler 21 May 2009

Wonderful title. Your perception is 20/20.10, for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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Saadat Tahir 19 April 2009

very very nice...really saadat

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Bob Blackwell 18 April 2009

The only way we can live life, is live it as it comes deal with each moment when it arrives. I like the way you express yourself so simply like the coracle which is quite a simple boat. You are a compassionate lady.

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Amin Khan 10 April 2009

Your poem reflects: Deep study, High expressions, Poor situation and rich views. Simply nice. Amin.

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Faran Khalid 05 April 2009

Good Work.... I like it.

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