Surayya Abbas


A Journey Through The Awkward Seas! - Poem by Surayya Abbas

Life is not secure
With tragedies
And miseries
All around
Yet, difficulties
Can be sought out
With internal wisdom
And beauty
So pure
So bright.

The missing links
Make the innards co-ordinate
With brain
And all customise
In right direction
To sail through the awkward seas
In coracle of reverie.




3/17/2009


Comments about A Journey Through The Awkward Seas! by Surayya Abbas

  • (5/21/2009 3:33:00 PM)

    Wonderful title. Your perception is 20/20.10, for you.

    Kind regards,

    Sandra
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  • Saadat Tahir (4/19/2009 5:59:00 AM)

    very very nice...really
    saadat
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  • (4/18/2009 8:12:00 AM)

    The only way we can live life, is live it as it comes deal with each moment when it arrives. I like the way you express yourself so simply like the coracle which is quite a simple boat. You are a compassionate lady. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/10/2009 12:26:00 PM)

    Your poem reflects:
    Deep study,
    High expressions,
    Poor situation and rich views.
    Simply nice.
    Amin.
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  • (4/5/2009 10:25:00 AM)

    Good Work.... I like it. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/3/2009 10:16:00 AM)

    'To sail through the awkward seas
    In coracle of reverie.'

    I liked that (: Awesome usage of words.
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  • (3/29/2009 10:09:00 AM)

    We must always do what is right, but it helps if we realise that everything changes given time. A thoughtful and well writtten poem (Report)Reply

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  • (3/25/2009 2:46:00 AM)

    spot on and very insightful. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/24/2009 12:59:00 PM)

    An analytical view of life's complexity! Excellent rendition. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/22/2009 5:49:00 PM)

    enlightening...thank you (Report)Reply

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  • Satheesan Rangorath (3/22/2009 1:30:00 PM)

    A thoughtful poem with a fine message. You put your world intellegently. One can keep it for a reference.
    Greetings
    Satheesan rangorath
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  • (3/22/2009 1:06:00 AM)

    This is so true. People have the resources within themselves to survive the
    worst things that can come our way. A very powerful message is contained
    in this piece.

    GW62
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  • Mohammed Al-balushi (3/22/2009 12:23:00 AM)

    i really enjoye reading it, will done (Report)Reply

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  • (3/22/2009 12:15:00 AM)

    you are so rite on that. good work (Report)Reply

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  • Meggie Gultiano (3/21/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    Poetry at its best..a well penned piece. thanks for this (Report)Reply

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  • (3/21/2009 7:48:00 AM)

    Hey, great work! Keep it up, bro. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/21/2009 2:30:00 AM)

    that was very beautiful. thatnks for sharing this great poem (Report)Reply

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  • (3/21/2009 1:03:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Well-penned and very nice flow of thoughts. (Report)Reply

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  • Barry A. Lanier (3/20/2009 3:45:00 PM)

    wonderful flow with a message of wisdom (Report)Reply

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  • (3/20/2009 12:56:00 PM)

    very nice. loved the way the words went so well together (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 17, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, April 20, 2009


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