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The Mother Nature

Rating: 4.1
In a cool winter evening
Sitting by the fireplace
Looking at the rainy shower
My heart dampened
With condensed drops of moisture
Travelling on the window
Like shiny diamond grains
Trying to cut the glass off
They were reflecting light
Like twinkling tears once I saw
In my Mother's eyes.
Out there in the lawn
Ten white roses on a single branch
Were praising the pure water
And dancing in chorus
Rain! Rain! Rain!
I could feel their refreshing mood
Like fragrance of my childhood.
My eyes filled with
Beauty of the Mother Nature!

Kesav Easwaran 05 June 2009
Wonderful write...good use of allegory in almost all lines...the image the 'diamond grains' create there is really nice...thanks Surayya...10
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Beautiful theme. You combined your Mother and Mother Nature to celebrate dancing delight of our gift of life, water. Wonderful imagery throughout. 10 Krarin Anderson
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C. P. Sharma 19 May 2009
Beautiful poetry. Mother Nature is a perennial source of bliss but engroosed in matter we are tormented and shattered. CP
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Sandra Fowler 19 May 2009
Beautiful.One of your very best. I like what you have seen from your own personal window on the world. Warm regards, Sandra
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sumaira .....ir 05 February 2009
surayya u have very sensitive heart as i can see in our poems very well write we need more from you dear
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Muhammad Shanazar 01 January 2009
The poem presents uncommon combination of images, winter, lawn, white roses, rain, shining drops and winter evening....good job go ahead. Shanazar
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Sundus Naseer 25 December 2008
Such a sweet poem....the combination of nature and mother's love is really a heart touching....regards
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Muizza Abbas 23 December 2008
Its a good poem, decorated with natural thoughts......
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Sameer Ahmed 21 December 2008
It's really a beautiful poem. The description of Nature's perfection is expressed in a very elegant fashion.....Regards
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 21 December 2008
Beautiful poem....Nature is the main creating force as well.
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