A Kiss Goodbye Poem by Andrew Dabar

A Kiss Goodbye

Rating: 5.0


Another day
And soon, I'll be on my way
To a job that I hate
But I cannot be late
So
I gripe, and I grumble
I fuss, and I fumble
The same old routine
(you know what I mean)
And in the dark
A path is marked
To the coffee pot
Which helps a lot—
In the cold, something hot

Another dawn
That I am drawn
Back down the hall
When I hear her call
With blankets wrapped about
She sits there, arms stretched out
She wants me to know
She hates when I go—
Here lips touch mine
Something travels down my spine
And suddenly
The day is good
I do what I should
I open the door
And face the world once more
Into the wind
Her scent on my skin
Which helps a lot—
In the cold, something hot
____________
Andrew Dabar

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 09 April 2023

5 STARS. bri : )

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Andrew Dabar 15 April 2023

Your my first and only reader, I think, and my first stars. Thank you! : ))

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Bri Edwards 09 April 2023

I LIKE THE RHYMING AND DESCRIPTION OF GOING-TO-WORK TIME. IS IT TRUE TO YOUR LIFE, I WONDER.

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Andrew Dabar 15 April 2023

Thanks, Bri! Yes, once upon a time, this poem was true in my life. I remember the details of that particular morning as if it were only yesterday.

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Bri Edwards 09 April 2023

WELOME, 'NEW POET', TO PH. YOUR LAST LINE GAVE ME A SMALL LAUGH. BRI : )

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Bri Edwards 09 April 2023

welcomw to PH, 'new poet'. the last line gave me a liile laugh.

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