A Little More Poem by Clive Culverhouse

A Little More

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I shaved my head
and wore a robe
the mountain pass
I found at last
grew thin alas
but fat I got
on nature's lot
her sounds were not
my thoughtless strobe
though I was dead
to the mountain's mass
in me she saw
I knew not what
my feet grew raw
I found my past
a timely flaw
the mountain pass
my life aghast
and all was for
a little more
though I was dead
I shaved my head

Tuesday, October 13, 2020
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A Little More
poetry by Clive Culverhouse

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 13 October 2020

the mountain pass my life aghast and all was for a little more though I was dead I shaved my head though I was dead i shaved m y head. a great poem. imagination and philosophy. tony

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Clive Culverhouse 15 October 2020

thanks for commenting on my poem A Little More, much appreciated....

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 October 2020

AGHAST LIFE FEELS SOUNDLESS THE NATURE! SHAVED HEAVE CAN'T BE COOL IN AUTUMNAL DEW! COZ- ANXIOUS MIND!

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Clive Culverhouse 15 October 2020

a poetic exchange thanks for interacting with my poem, much appreciated..., .,

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