A Love Like You Poem by Carike Klokow

A Love Like You

Rating: 3.0


I watch your shadow move
you sweep me off my feet
closer into you
until our lips do meet

Cherryblossom cheeks
you rub against my neck
i love it when u speak
when our eyes connect

Your blonde hair dancing in the sun
your perfume hanging in the air
our bodies have definately begun
to form a graceful pair

Just kiss me now two lips pressed
against eachother - onto you
i know that i am truely blessed
to have a love so true

a love like you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kenneth Fordham 06 February 2008

Very well written, good flow, good rhyme, you might want to watch your spelling and capitals where needed, I think the only thing I would have done differently is to put a space inbetween the last line, to keep it seperate from your last stanza. Good Job, Ken

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Kefentse Sathekge 05 November 2007

you got what it takes to grow in poetry, i can feel while reading that it came deep within you.

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