Lillian Jamison

Rookie (February 31,1940 / Los Angeles)

{a Love Song} - Poem by Lillian Jamison

The beat of my heart
With yours so in sync
Of all melodies played
The one I forever wish to hear

The smile upon my lips
A reason for joy
Brightness to my day
Bringing laughter to my life

Advice, warmth and comfort
In me burns desire
And so I revel in
All that you are.....


Comments about {a Love Song} by Lillian Jamison

  • (4/18/2008 6:34:00 AM)


    The deepth of love within you pen..
    Well done

    Patricia
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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (11/18/2007 11:59:00 AM)


    as heart when reveled by the depth of love and love when razzled by the depth of warmth resourced from within that precipitates by the melodis thrumming the lips, beautiful write yet Lilly xox, i like it and i credt with10+, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (11/16/2007 9:35:00 PM)


    Love songs always speak to the heart just like this well written poem
    Rosemary
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  • (11/14/2007 12:50:00 AM)


    the melody of love.....its a great poem (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (11/13/2007 10:51:00 PM)


    Romantic and smooth...last 2 lines define the tone you set from the start.
    Excellent write, young Belle!

    ~ ~ ~
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  • (11/13/2007 5:38:00 PM)


    Very warm and genuine. Praise for your romantic soul.

    As always,

    Sandra
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  • (11/13/2007 5:36:00 PM)


    Very lovely, great write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, April 25, 2011


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