David Keig

Rookie - 13 Points (1951 / UK)

A Lover From The Past - Poem by David Keig

I knew you'd have a fuller figure
But never thought that you'd be bigger
Than the side of any house
And me as skinny as a mouse
The intervening years it seems
Have dashed my hopes and killed my dreams
You used to see a lot of me
Now there's a lot of you to see.

Comments about A Lover From The Past by David Keig

  • (3/4/2008 3:34:00 PM)

    Once again so cute..... this one made me also want to keep reading..... It was really good one though..... =) (Report) Reply

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  • (12/19/2004 1:33:00 AM)

    Cute, nice punch.Short though, I'de like to keep reading. (Report) Reply

  • (11/4/2004 10:54:00 AM)

    not sure if i like this one. i hope it is figurative. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 17, 2004

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 8, 2010

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