A Past Love Poem by David Keig

A Past Love

Rating: 5.0


Our love is like a melody
Played badly out of tune
Our love is like those plants we bought
That never seem to bloom
Our love is like an acid bath
That quickly strips away
All pretence of civility
No matter what we say.

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Susan Williams 15 September 2018

Our love is like a melody Played badly out of tune

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Heather Wilkins 18 June 2013

some loves last some do not. our love is like a melody- played badly out of tune- - so it goes. nice work

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David Barlow 13 November 2007

Painfully true for so many David well observed and written. Thank you, david

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poetry lover 13 November 2007

very nice, I loved it

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