Kev Elmer

Rookie (Wales)

A Message - Poem by Kev Elmer

If your life was about to end,
what sort of message would you send?
Would it be of heaven, the place to be?
Or would it be of love for people to see?
A message of pain that we shouldn't give?
Or on life and how we should live?
A message to wish upon a star?
To follow your dreams and go so far?
A message of hell and every sin?
Or of happiness you shared with him?
A message of joy from when she sees you?
Or of plans of what you didn't do?
So what sort of message would you send?
If your life was about to end.


Comments about A Message by Kev Elmer

  • (1/26/2007 6:16:00 PM)


    This poem is plain and simple
    You are shallow
    You hide your feelings
    that's the message
    I get
    When I read your message     (Report) Reply

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  • (4/27/2006 8:29:00 PM)


    i like your writing style, very good (Report) Reply

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  • (4/22/2006 9:26:00 PM)


    I love poems that make us question ourselves and this surely does that! I think that is a question that we should think of...it may say alot about us. Great poem. I look forward to reading more but...I'm heading to sleep! Sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

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  • (4/20/2006 8:54:00 AM)


    Make the most of your life and be happy with the right wife! lol Is that ok Kev? lol I think the message I would like to leave is Don't Delete My Poetry! lol Always hopeful Tai (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 20, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 22, 2006
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