Thursday, April 20, 2006

A Message

Rating: 4.3
If your life was about to end,
what sort of message would you send?
Would it be of heaven, the place to be?
Or would it be of love for people to see?
A message of pain that we shouldn't give?
Or on life and how we should live?
A message to wish upon a star?
To follow your dreams and go so far?
A message of hell and every sin?
Or of happiness you shared with him?
A message of joy from when she sees you?
Or of plans of what you didn't do?
So what sort of message would you send?
If your life was about to end.
Kev Elmer
Aldo Kraas 26 January 2007
This poem is plain and simple You are shallow You hide your feelings that's the message I get When I read your message
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trisha evensen 27 April 2006
i like your writing style, very good
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Mary Nagy 22 April 2006
I love poems that make us question ourselves and this surely does that! I think that is a question that we should think may say alot about us. Great poem. I look forward to reading more but...I'm heading to sleep! Sincerely, Mary
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***** ********* 20 April 2006
Make the most of your life and be happy with the right wife! lol Is that ok Kev? lol I think the message I would like to leave is Don't Delete My Poetry! lol Always hopeful Tai
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