Kev Elmer

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A Cut To Deep - Poem by Kev Elmer

Out of my cut the blood will creap
on my knees I begin to weap
watchin the blood fall over my arm
washing away all the harm
everyday I do the same
to take away all the pain
within every cut comes such relief
I know I shouldn't have such a belief
but it takes away the fear
of ever hurting you my dear

Now my blood is on the floor
I'll miss you forever more
I've cut myself a little to deep
as I'm laying in this heap
I've never cut this deep before
is it cause my heart is sore?
at least its given me such relief
it looks like im living my final belief
now the lights are about to go out
please dont cry, scream or shout....


Comments about A Cut To Deep by Kev Elmer

  • Tonya Buck (10/9/2012 8:32:00 AM)


    I absolutely love reading your poems. They always touch me, move me in some way. This is a good explanation of the anguish you dealing with. I just wish I would have chose to read it at a different time. It made me very sad, and put idea's in my head that I don't want. Thank you for sharing Kev. (Report) Reply

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  • john tiong chunghoo (4/23/2006 12:38:00 AM)


    you use very apt comparisons to show your anguish. good poem. (Report) Reply

  • (4/21/2006 12:02:00 AM)


    honestly......a poem can tell alot about the poet........even though i find this poem creepy in a sense its also deep....keep it up (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 15, 2006



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