Saturday, April 15, 2006

A Cut To Deep

Rating: 4.6
Out of my cut the blood will creap
on my knees I begin to weap
watchin the blood fall over my arm
washing away all the harm
everyday I do the same
to take away all the pain
within every cut comes such relief
I know I shouldn't have such a belief
but it takes away the fear
of ever hurting you my dear

Now my blood is on the floor
I'll miss you forever more
I've cut myself a little to deep
as I'm laying in this heap
I've never cut this deep before
is it cause my heart is sore?
at least its given me such relief
it looks like im living my final belief
now the lights are about to go out
please dont cry, scream or shout....
Kev Elmer
Tonya Buck 09 October 2012
I absolutely love reading your poems. They always touch me, move me in some way. This is a good explanation of the anguish you dealing with. I just wish I would have chose to read it at a different time. It made me very sad, and put idea's in my head that I don't want. Thank you for sharing Kev.
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John Tiong Chunghoo 23 April 2006
you use very apt comparisons to show your anguish. good poem.
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Rachael Hardy 21 April 2006
honestly......a poem can tell alot about the poet........even though i find this poem creepy in a sense its also deep....keep it up
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