A Minor Poem by Joseph Narusiewicz

A Minor

Rating: 2.8


Ravenous sorrow a sculpture of indifference
Illusions like a wake of dark red purple draperies
We are the expectations of a grandiose prayer
Nothing real breathes for long
Pour your joy from streams of time
These cracks in the broken wall
Your love is a distant summer
Kiss me until I know the stars love me
Do you ever feel the cold until you’re numb?
I know you are my mirror
I know we are a couple of minor chords
People need me and I need people
Let’s keep each other warm?
At least as warm as we can be
I always liked A minor

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Gogeshvili 14 January 2012

We are the expectations of a grandiose prayer ........................................................... Your love is a distant summer Kiss me until I know the stars love me ............................................................. I know we are a couple of minor chords ................................................................ I liked this minor -sincere poem which has placed inside itself many remarkable poetic- pearls... 10....XXX Tsira

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Joseph Narusiewicz

Joseph Narusiewicz

So St Paul, Minnesota
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