A Mistake.... Poem by Bullion Grey

A Mistake....

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did we fall, or grow,
did we sin, or miss the mark?
did we make a mistake, or error on some part.
did we cross the line, or step beyond our place?
Or did we live and learn as we went along,
as we gathered skills of living, despite the right or wrong?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ritty Patnaik 21 September 2009

dear b.g.......we made mistakes, forgot our roles, fell many times...but tried to trudge along life to meet our goal.introspection at its best.lovely write. ritty

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Tai Chi Italy 18 September 2009

I think we live and learn because, we are slow, but we humans do learn...that is the whole point of life imo. A philosophical poem on life as we blow it. Smiling at you Tai

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