Cristina Teodor

Rookie - 27 Points (18.11.1973 / Romania)

A Mysterious Man Or A Deja Vu Experience? - Poem by Cristina Teodor

I'm walking on the street and a lot of people passing by,
I'm just in a middle of a crowd and suddenly i felt shivers on my spine,
I met his eyes and i want to keep on walking,
But i've noticed my body didn't responding.

His charming eyes than, i could see,
He was stopping also to stare at me,
He has something special that i feel i know,
Our eyes meet and we smiled with glow.

I feel something different that i can't explain,
It's like i know him forever or it seems to me,
The warmth of his look is melting me with a smile,
Why i'm feeling so, my face is burning like fire.

The sparkle in his eyes, his look so divine,
It makes my lips sealed, i couldn't say a thing,
I'm keep on gaze at him and i saw in his amazing eyes,
All my life developing with my sorrows, my success, my dreams.

Do i know him, he seem familiar to me,
I feel hypnotize by his eyes, i can't move, i can't do a thing,
I keep stare at him and asking myself,
Do i know you mysterious man, do we met in this life or another galaxy?

I feel his warmth, his love,
And i don't want to lose him,
Who is this man standing in front of me,
Is he a mysterious man or a deja vu experience?

Comments about A Mysterious Man Or A Deja Vu Experience? by Cristina Teodor

  • Vipins PuthooranVipins Puthooran (12/2/2011 6:02:00 AM)

    What a beautiful feeling that you've got when looking at that mysterious man! ! !
    May love be blossm'd in the vale of thine heart
    An excellent poem! ! ! !

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  • Shadow Girl (11/25/2011 10:49:00 PM)

    This is really nice...a rare feeling..strong, passionate words....i liked it.

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  • Narayanan Ramakrishnan (8/27/2011 1:57:00 AM)

    Oh, great. A great write beautifully narrated that deserves tobe read and reread, so that the dejavu feeling is erased and reality felt. (Report)Reply

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  • Philip Jose (6/22/2011 8:49:00 AM)

    great poem, and is that a reality or a deja vu? (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 2, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 2, 2011

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