poet Cristina Teodor

Cristina Teodor

A Pantoum - What Flower Do I Want To Be?

What flower do i want to be?
I ask myself in garden of the world,
In front of it i humble contemplate,
Amazed by beautiness that lies in it.

I ask myself in garden of the world,
A rose with seductive suave fragrance i feel,
Amazed by beautiness that lies in it,
So romantic feelings the velvet rose petals awakes in me.

A rose with seductive suave fragrance i feel,
Or a chrysanthemum with charismatic perfume,
So romantic feelings the velvet rose petals awakes in me,
Such amazing pearl of autumn is the elegant chrysanthemum.

Or a chrysanthemum with charismatic perfume,
Or a tulip with perfect shapes and smooth lines,
Such amazing pearl of autumn is the elegant chrysanthemum,
Such a worthy tulip rising up like a pray towards the sun.

Or a tulip with perfect shapes and smooth lines,
Or another flowers with delicate design,
Such a worthy tulip rising up like a pray towards the sun,
So amazing flowers lies in front of me.

Or another flowers with delicate design,
Garden of the world is infinite,
Such amazing flowers lie in front of me,
From all of these beauties i wonder.

Garden of the world is infinite,
In front of it i humble contemplate,
From all of these beauties i wonder,
What flower do i want to be?

Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 24, 2011
Poem Edited: Friday, November 25, 2011

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  • Vipins PuthooranVipins Puthooran (12/2/2011 4:47:00 AM)

    What a wonderful poem!
    I'll bestow you a laurel with the queen of flowers-Rose as I'm the King of flower, the Orchid...
    A nectarell Rose! ! ! !
    Amazing poem! ! ! Top marks..
    VIPINS

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (12/1/2011 7:33:00 PM)

    What a wonderful poem full of dreams and fantastic images. Great, Cristina

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  • Shadow Girl (11/25/2011 10:47:00 PM)

    This made me smile..such a beautiful, thoughtful powm..nice to read something optomistic and happy. Well done!
    -SG

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