A struggle in native land
Deprived of basic needs
Lack of education
Drove me away to an unknown land
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I agree with Kee, you are indeed a patriotic poet Sutha.10 for you then.
very good way poem made by a born talent see her blooms of words flow Now after fifty years of independence Its glows with pride and dignity With the name of Malaysia A land of diverse culture and religion A land called Borneo with lush greenery
Oh my dear Sutha, Trying to impress others by saying that you are indeed a Malaysian, eh! ! I know exactly what you are trying to say here..because obviously we are in the same boat..Nice one... By the way, since when you are so patriotic...lol...Keep writing... With love, who else...K.Poornima...