Friday, February 15, 2008

A New Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

A New Day

Dawning of a new day…
Melting midnight fears away
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JoJo Bean, Dodgy Dave and Meggie Gultiano
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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 16 March 2008

Finally I made it over to check out your combined work as so appreciate all three of your guys poetry! ((Smile)) This is a wonderful, short and sweet piece that holds one captive by their images of a New day... Thanx for sharing your creativity in this way....10! Shelley

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Riquetta Elliott 23 February 2008

This is a wonderful masterpiece keep it up.

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Lee Degnan 17 February 2008

Very sing-song... I like it! A nice introduction for me to read as first of your joint efforts! Reading on! :) Hugs, Lee

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 16 February 2008

I always look to the morrow, not to the past and all it's sorrow, what awaits me only time will tell, so long my friends no time to dwell.. Andy x

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Melvina Germain 15 February 2008

A very beautiful poem, excellent rhyme, good flow. I enjoyed the read very much, excellent poem once again trio. Melvina

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Thad Wilk 15 February 2008

A new day is dawning, welcoming all to a magical morning! A delight to read! ! ! *10*! ! Thanks for sharing JoAnn, David and Meggie! ! Friend Thad

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Sandra Fowler 15 February 2008

Such a warm, hopeful poem. It is a pleasure to read. Ten from me. Love, Sandra

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