A New Life Poem by Jessica LaDuron

A New Life

Rating: 4.5


my mind is tattered,
and i am about to give up,
these strands that are holding me up,
have been strecthed to the limit,
i am going to fall,
fal into the black oblivion,
that most souls have never been able to get out of.
what am i going to do,
i pray to god,
something i haven't done in years,
i pray that it is quick and painless
hoping he hears my last request,
my last request that i don't deserve,
i cry,
harder then i ever have in years,
i dont deserve this life
i have been given so many breaks,
and i have broken so many hearts.
all because i am not strong enough.
i want to be strong,
i want to stand up for everything that i have done,
all the pain i have caused,
i want a second chance,
i want to live my life,
they way it should of benn led,
a long time ago.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Egi David Perdana 14 May 2008

you must know my life it's very hard, and if u thing, u life full of sorrow cause a trouble u and u boy friends is very very big wrong, look at the sky! ! , in the world more suffer than you and than me, but this poems it's very goods I love it from your ego hehe,10 for you

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Egi David Perdana 14 May 2008

you must know my life it's very hard, and if u thing, u life full of sorrow cause a trouble u and u boy friends is very very big wrong, look at the sky! ! , in the world more suffer than you and than me, but this poems it's very goods I love it from your ego hehe,10 for you

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 May 2008

whatever happened in your life..............the show must goes on.we can not put a brake.be strong and positive, you'll be fine jessie.

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Jessica LaDuron

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