Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 397,339 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A New 'Love Cult' - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I couldn’t understand the logic behind
Why person hesitate and acknowledge and find?
Disclosure of correct age for the want of sheer fear
Is he not sure that it may land in catastrophe to bear?

Love is heavenly sent gift and must be respected
Before surrendering to strangers it must be inspected
Does that bother you that it may be rejected and fallen through?
Is there no other way to impress up on and to woo?

Does love see age; color beautiful face or, charm?
Does it not send the some belonging and greetings warm?
Does that confine to only sensual feeling and attachment?
I think none of it is paramount for the commencement

Love stands for, sacrifice, honesty and above all surrender
Many of us stand for its abusive use and act as offender
Total deception and regard for outer beauty only for lust
How one can afford to forget everything sans simple trust?

One may forget everything and seek nothing except simple love
He or she may go to the extent of forgetting world or globe
One can dash against the wall if that is proving difficult
It is new way of dealing with love and known as “love cult”

I may fall for simple love and to define it in eternal way
To way traffic without any hindrance except simple say
Where one listens and other say quietly to focus on means
It matters less which way it goes and leads in to loss or wins

The deception may lead you to extinction and way to grave
It is not an extra quality of a person to be called brave
It may end in fiasco for Promised Land of beautiful place
You will be lost for ever in mind as print without any trace

It demands and expects every one to rise and see the reason
You may be intelligent and extra ordinarily gifted person
What is it to all if you turn out to be deserter and unfaithful?
What will be left out of holy relation to show it as meaningful?

I have been left out by people as known critic of falsehood
I go for all out efforts to make it success in my own neighborhood
It is pulse of pure heart that has to be heard from the long distance
I can quote and put it right in correct perspective as good instances


I shall long for and trust the out come of true feelings
It has to have belonging and honest dealing
It is not that you deceive the person and go into hiding
It has bad implications and leads to disastrous findings

I may long for such a fine and trust worthy relation
I can go all out for its preservence and even for citation
I can’t afford to loose heart that beats for lovely union
I shall consider my self worthy if that comes from true companion


Comments about A New 'Love Cult' by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (4/19/2010 9:08:00 AM)


    I couldn’t understand the logic behind
    Why person hesitate and acknowledge and find?
    Disclosure of correct age for the want of sheer fear
    Is he not sure that it may land in catastrophe to bear? it is clear deception and treachery......10
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  • (4/10/2010 11:33:00 PM)


    Wow this is good..i like the flow of rhythms. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 10, 2010



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