A New Place To Live Poem by amit mitra

A New Place To Live

Rating: 5.0


there comes a time some day in your life
when you need to change your arid ways
change the place where you have lived
so get ready theres a brand new phase

it may be tiring it may be hard
it might take your breath away
but still that's the your path fate has chosen
maybe this is THEchange that'll make your day

no one likes to tread the new
no one likes to take the risk
but wonders may happen no one knows
so just be happy and do the frisk

change is permanent as they tell
so change is the thing that you must do
cause change will cut the old of you
and change will keep you fresh and new

Tuesday, November 17, 2015
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 17 November 2015

A very well written poem Amit. Change is inevitable yet mostly dreaded and resisted.. Thanks for sharing..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 November 2015

Change will cut the old of you And change will keep you fresh and new Fantastic realization. Mutations always take place, though slowly, in all living things for making them more compatible with the changing circumstances. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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