Thoughts Abound Poem by amit mitra
Thoughts Abound
I never really thought that I can write verse
my thoughts were wayward and so adverse
But still I happened to write down one
it may be short but still it was fun
Thoughts are free flowing spontaneous now
it is a miracle so I will bow
in the praise of god and the holy spirit
to give me the power to accomplish it
Now the reluctance the barrier is broken
its time to bare my heart and open
to share with one and share with all
ideas and dreams both big and small
let me also hear from you
how you felt when you were new
could you really hide your passion
behind the veil of stony impression
I am sure it was not so
Since jubilance should be soaring and not hidden low
Really intersting thoughts Amit.. And your choice of couplets to express them is good too... Thank you for sharing..
I never really thought that I can write verse my thoughts were wayward and so adverse But still I happened to write down one it may be short but still it was fun [..] / let me also hear from you how you felt when you were new / [..] nicely put, Amit. This is the feeling everyone had, here.. WELCOME at P.H.! Cheers
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4/23/2024 11:39:54 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Thoughts are free flowing spontaneous now it is a miracle so I will bow in the praise of god and the holy spirit to give me the power to accomplish it. these are the great lines of your poem. i love it. go and writing. dont compare yourself with others who write. dont be diffident. you are unique. tony