amit mitra


Thoughts Abound - Poem by amit mitra

I never really thought that I can write verse
my thoughts were wayward and so adverse

But still I happened to write down one
it may be short but still it was fun

Thoughts are free flowing spontaneous now
it is a miracle so I will bow

in the praise of god and the holy spirit
to give me the power to accomplish it

Now the reluctance the barrier is broken
its time to bare my heart and open

to share with one and share with all
ideas and dreams both big and small

let me also hear from you
how you felt when you were new

could you really hide your passion
behind the veil of stony impression

I am sure it was not so
Since jubilance should be soaring and not hidden low

Topic(s) of this poem: lyrics

Form: Couplet


Comments about Thoughts Abound by amit mitra

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (11/17/2015 3:25:00 AM)


    Thoughts are free flowing spontaneous now
    it is a miracle so I will bow

    in the praise of god and the holy spirit
    to give me the power to accomplish it. these are the great lines of your poem. i love it. go and writing. dont compare yourself with others who write. dont be diffident. you are unique. tony
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  • Souren Mondal (11/4/2015 5:28:00 AM)


    Really intersting thoughts Amit.. And your choice of couplets to express them is good too...

    Thank you for sharing..
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  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (10/29/2015 8:31:00 AM)


    Very well expressed.Love it. (Report) Reply

  • Fabrizio Frosini (10/29/2015 6:29:00 AM)


    I never really thought that I can write verse
    my thoughts were wayward and so adverse

    But still I happened to write down one
    it may be short but still it was fun

    [..] / let me also hear from you
    how you felt when you were new / [..]

    nicely put, Amit. This is the feeling everyone had, here.. WELCOME at P.H.!
    Cheers
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  • Pijush Biswas (10/29/2015 6:08:00 AM)


    very good written
    well rhymed
    like it
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 29, 2015



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