A News - 01 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

A News - 01

Rating: 4.9


A news of sad demise

Is a tide of separation that

Floods the green lawn of dreams

With salts of sorrows

And sand of bitter pain.

Wednesday, September 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: death of a friend,deaths,friendship,sad,sadness,separation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mayurakshi Ojha 07 December 2017

A news of sad demise Is a tide of separation that Floods the green lawn of dreams Great poetic skill. thanks for sharing it. 10+++ Eva

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Thank you dear Eva for your nicely chosen words of encouragement.

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Mayurakshi Ojha 07 December 2017

A news of sad demise Is a tide of separation that Floods the green lawn of dreams Great poetic skill. thanks for sharing it.

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Thank you Eva dear for your nicely chosen words of encouragement.

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Sabita Sahoo 29 September 2017

Floods the green lawn of dreams With salts of sorrows And sand of bitter pain. Great imagery. Thanks. 10++++

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Thank you dear SS for your nicely chosen words of encouragement.

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Alina Kaikeyi 28 September 2017

a tide of separation that Floods the green lawn of dreams With salts of sorrows

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Thank you Alina dear for your nicely chosen words of encouragement.

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Sanghamitra Nayak 28 September 2017

A news of sad demise Is a tide of separation that Floods the green lawn of dreams With salts of sorrows Nicely penned with imageries. Thanks. 10+++

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Rajendra Rout 10 May 2018

I agree with you Sanghamitra

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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