A Nice Execution Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Nice Execution

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When a cloud rises from earth to the skies,
Sometimes the clouds are reflected as pure rains,
These are the clouds that are not polluted.

When a cloud learns to speak the earthly lies,
Such a cloud is refracted in colorful stains,
These are the blended clouds that are polluted.

My heart is the deepest ocean and never cries,
Reflects the pleasure but absorbs the pains,
The red water is now too thin and too diluted.

Eyes have never seen you, still a human ne'er denies,
You are humans' loveliest dream in hearts and brains,
Be unveiled as blue light, let my soul be routed.

My Lord! Before red color is white and the poet dies,
Go on reflecting my thoughts in a poem that sustains,
The truth that is love in life, by you nicely executed!

Friday, June 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 August 2020

Just happy to read this beautiful poem again. A poetic gem that soothes the soul. Thank you for sharing, Sir.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 June 2020

What a wonderful and meaningful write. A poetic gem that unveils our deep faith in God. The last two stanzas made me cry. Very touching lines that touch the core of the heart of those believers. So beautifully written. Onto my Poem List. A treasure to be kept in my heart.

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