A Night At Frankie's Poem by poppy miller

A Night At Frankie's



It began with the keys
Slow and haunting
Like a breeze humming through willow
Building like seeds sprouting,
Shooting upward with short piercing
Notes that bloom in the listeners' ear

Liquor swirls in iced glasses
Fizzing onto distempered walls
Smelling of damp and rot
Like old bones

Only two on the dance floor
But it's enough visuals
As hips slither round
like entwined snakes
Tongues darting in, out,
push, thrust.
The gin working its magic.

The Mississippi was on them,
Rolling, as the trumpet sprang
Into action, painting the mood
Crimson as post-dawn groans
Sailed from russet raw lips
The elemental skin of rhythm
Wet with tacky sweat sinking
As the last strains of sax played out.

©

17/5/2016

Wednesday, May 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: blues,imagery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poppy Miller 29 May 2016

Cheers Terry, glad you enjoyed: D

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Terry Dawson 18 May 2016

Wonderful imagery!!

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