A Night, By Your Side Poem by Putholi Arumugham

A Night, By Your Side

Rating: 4.5


Waves, the words of these untiring seas
Writing an endless poetry in your beauty’s praise.
Stars, the night earth’s replacement for birds
In your blanket to match hues in your soporific eyes

Breeze, the partner for the moon light at this hour
at ball dance which music conducts in your honor.
Lark and nightingales, the singers of lullabies for world
by your side to take notes of your sleepy blabberings.


Dews, perspiration of green grasses turning blue
due to shameful loss in matching your skins softness



Bringing all these into life
and reflecting them in the tiny dropp of tears
of joy at the corner of my eye
Your careless whispers in my ears.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nadushka Delrio 30 May 2008

It's lovely. I really like the ending.

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Loving Hate 30 May 2008

wow, its so beautiful. ur an amazing writer.

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Rani Turton 30 May 2008

Well-written with sensual imagery that borders on the romantic. The phrases have been very well-coined, so that the emotion of the moment gets through to the reader.

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Lynda Robson 30 May 2008

A very passionate poem, I enjoyed reading it, well penned, Lynda xx

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Serenity Prayer 29 May 2008

awwww. i like it. its kool and cute.

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i like this poem is really good

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Concetta Neville 13 April 2009

Wow, this was very good. very sweet to read.10+

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Meena Iyer 17 December 2008

Tender romance! lovely work!

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Kesav Easwaran 01 June 2008

'Waves, the words of these untiring seas Writing an endless poetry in your beauty’s praise' these first two lines give a robust kicking start for this beautiful romantic poem...the style more or less mine! very much enjoyed... congrats, arumugham! ten for you

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Cora Lee 30 May 2008

Wow. I love this poem, your an amazing writer. Simply beautiful. It gives of a wonderful image to me. Great everything =] 'Stars, the earth’s replacement for birds' amazing line by the way. =].

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