Waves, the words of these untiring seas
Writing an endless poetry in your beauty’s praise.
Stars, the night earth’s replacement for birds
In your blanket to match hues in your soporific eyes
Breeze, the partner for the moon light at this hour
at ball dance which music conducts in your honor.
Lark and nightingales, the singers of lullabies for world
by your side to take notes of your sleepy blabberings.
Dews, perspiration of green grasses turning blue
due to shameful loss in matching your skins softness
Bringing all these into life
and reflecting them in the tiny dropp of tears
of joy at the corner of my eye
Your careless whispers in my ears.
Well-written with sensual imagery that borders on the romantic. The phrases have been very well-coined, so that the emotion of the moment gets through to the reader.
A very passionate poem, I enjoyed reading it, well penned, Lynda xx
'Waves, the words of these untiring seas Writing an endless poetry in your beauty’s praise' these first two lines give a robust kicking start for this beautiful romantic poem...the style more or less mine! very much enjoyed... congrats, arumugham! ten for you
Wow. I love this poem, your an amazing writer. Simply beautiful. It gives of a wonderful image to me. Great everything =] 'Stars, the earth’s replacement for birds' amazing line by the way. =].
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It's lovely. I really like the ending.