Timothy Weiermann

Rookie (Friday, August 13th,1993 / Tucson, Arizona)

Dark Souls With Blood Stains - Poem by Timothy Weiermann

My soul dyed dark with blood stains,
My eyes mask a hidden pain

My soul soaked with others death
The sands of time prevent their final breath

My life lives with hidden lies
My world is soaked with crimson skies

Blood splash red, the cries of the dead
Lying on the brink of death,
Love for my self, never another

Blood splash red, crying in my bed
Dark eyes crying to see their final breath
Going as far as to threaten a life

Scum you are, trash I said
After my defeat, I remember crying in my bed

Explosions so close I could feel the heat
With every one dieing, my heart completes the beat
With souls released every battle, and capture their souls forever
With dieing cries of madness, the soulless bodies are incapable of life

I filled their last moments with thought of strife


Comments about Dark Souls With Blood Stains by Timothy Weiermann

  • (1/20/2017 7:48:00 AM)

    It ironically sounds like the game Dark Souls. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/9/2009 12:01:00 PM)

    nice poem....
    keep it up.
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  • (8/26/2008 11:29:00 PM)

    Very unique, an incredible wave of vocabulary with a mixture of emotions, lovely, keep up the good work (Report)Reply

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  • (8/21/2008 6:20:00 PM)

    Omigosh! This is an incredable poem you've written!
    It's so depressing but it's so awesome how you combined your feelings and your love of poetry!

    That is an excellent poem....If you want you can look up my poems and read them.
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  • (8/12/2008 10:09:00 AM)

    I've always had a thing for not so calming poems. And this one, well I can feel the power radeating off of it!

    And so we go,
    Paul
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  • (8/11/2008 12:56:00 PM)

    Wow this is very powerful! You really are a good writer. Keep using emotions I personally think it is what sets the darker side of writing apart from the fluff. (Report)Reply

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  • Tyease Collins (8/11/2008 12:37:00 PM)

    Awesome poem.
    I love dark poems like this.
    You are a really good poet

    -Tess C.
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  • Ency Bearis (8/8/2008 2:04:00 AM)

    a good flow of verses...you did good work in this...nice (Report)Reply

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  • (8/7/2008 1:04:00 PM)

    This one is very good. I like the dark feeling you create with your words. This is a poem that can be felt. I have a question though. In the first line, did you mean to say 'died' or 'dyed' as in colored? I can see how both would work, but if you did intend 'died' then I would put a few elipses(...) after the word in order to avoid any more confusion as to meaning. My soul died...dark with blood stains. Write on young bard. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/7/2008 12:00:00 PM)

    wow....and i thougth the other one was great. lol. fanastic. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/6/2008 6:11:00 PM)

    I truly loved the imagry in this poem. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 30, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, August 22, 2008


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