Tuesday, June 27, 2006

A Peasant And A Pince-Nez Noblewoman Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a prima Donna in an opera she comes to the harvest festival
The farmers and their families were gathered.
He holds a festoon in fervour which will be offered her at the Commemoration and he thinks this opportunity as a heyday!
Will this willowy idol recognize him among the crowd?
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Duncan Wyllie 29 June 2006

A very smooth flowing poem that, engages the reader in both song and dance Thankyou Nimal Love Duncan X

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Jerry Hughes 29 June 2006

great stuff Nimal, and you've won a fan in Alison to boot, well done...

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Alison Cassidy 28 June 2006

Dearest Nimal, I am honoured that you have dedicated this beautiful poem to me. Your warmth and compassion for your subject shine through your words. I particularly love the last line and your use of the word 'merrily'. Thank you for your kindness. Fond love, Poetess Alison Cassidy XXXX

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Sandra Fowler 28 June 2006

A smile is the ultimate gift worth giving in this small story poem. Very nostalgic write. Ten from me. Sandra

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