A Piece Of Me On The Other Side Of The Glass Poem by Naomi Waters

A Piece Of Me On The Other Side Of The Glass

Rating: 5.0


If this glass was not between us
Then my dear we could touch
But the doctors have warned me of the consequences of this wish
They shattered my spirit with their heart breaking news
I am not allowed to hold you in my arms
Or sing you a lullaby while I rock you to sleep
I wont even be able to watch you grow up
Because you're running out of time
I've been told over and over again
That I won't be a mother for much longer
I'm losing you and there's nothing I can do to stop it
My precious daughter
My darling baby
You are fading away
And with every day that passes you slip further into death
Into a deep, dark slumber which you will never wake from
God, I beg of you to let me keep my child
The little one that you are taking from me forever
It isn't fair
Then again, life isn't fair
I was a fool to ever believe it was
Yes my girl, sweetie, I know you're dying, the fact is crystal clear, but I wont accept it
The moment you breathe your last
I will give in to my desires
As I follow you to the next life
A mother's love is a force to be reckoned with
Something that cannot be stopped
My husband
Your father
Will be leaving two bodies behind in the cemetery
When the reaper takes us both to the golden gates
There we will stay together as a broken, a not yet whole, family
Until my other half comes to join us there

Wednesday, April 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: tragedy,death,god,heaven,mother and child ,reaper,sorrow
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I am so sorry I havent published anything for awhile but I have a valid reason. My interent has been down for awhile and I havent been able to get it back up. I am using the internet at a friends house so that I can finally publish a poem. Since it has been awhile I decided to work especially hard on this particular poem to make up for my absence. I hope you guys can forgive me. I am going to try to establish a more normal publication rate, whenever I write another poem I will publish it on a Wednesday because thats when im at my friends house. If you guys have different ideas on that or you want to suggest a topic idea then send me a message sometime. See you later!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 31 May 2018

And thank you very much for the 'Poet's Notes'. Hope, you will be able to write and publish poems more frequently from now on. I've rated your poem. it gets 10/10 from me.

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Khairul Ahsan 31 May 2018

This poem pierced my heart while I was reading it. I hope, you haven't written it on real life experience. Even it be so, you must have known some mother who has had this kind of experience. My heartfelt sympathy for her! 'A mother's love is a force to be reckoned with Something that cannot be stopped' - it is known to all, but your emphatic assertion makes one feel how true it is!

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Naomi Waters 04 July 2018

I actually haven't experienced this. But I have had several people tell me that I am good at writing from the experience of another. Thank you so much for taking time out of your day to comment!

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Naomi Waters

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Houston, Texas
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