I Want It Back Poem by Naomi Waters

I Want It Back

Rating: 5.0


Something I used to love
Has been corrupted by my own touch
Without the release im broken
Running on empty
Trying to grasp at straws
I cant cry out
Not one person is around to hear me
My voice nothing more than a whisper
I have one last resort
The only way I can escape
Be free of this life
Is to embrace who I really am

Thursday, September 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sochukwu Ivye 25 October 2017

Well articulated piece in a climactic flow. You melt my heart with your words and context.

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Naomi Waters 26 October 2017

Well my heart melts with your loving comment

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 September 2017

Love has been corrupted by touch. This has given pain. Such embracing of pain has provoked thought. Amazing sharing is done here...10

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Naomi Waters 24 October 2017

It makes me happy when people enjoy what I write, thanks for your opinion. :)

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