A Place In Mind Poem by Frederick Nellist

A Place In Mind

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I'm from a place so precious in mind
I'm from a moment long time passed
I'm from a memory that happened fast
The place my childhood was inclined.

I'm from a place with a door called Two
I'm from a dwelling of soulful prayers
I'm from a place where poverty flares
A place my mothers child passed through.

I'm from a place seen with an aged eye
I'm from a past where my memories fly
A place my body was not meant to lie
A place I picture when I need to cry.

I'm from a place of sweet summer wine
A place from where my person did stray
But a place I know my heart will stay
An other place would be way out of line.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 10 June 2019

beautiful stanza- I'm from a place seen with an aged eye I'm from a past where my memories fly A place my body was not meant to lie A place I picture when I need to cry. ..../// beautiful poem

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Butch Decatoria 04 June 2019

Thanks for sharing, nice work.

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Gajanan Mishra 03 June 2019

Sweet summer wine/ way out of line, good write

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Freddie Nellist 03 June 2019

Thank you sir for your comments. Despite my age of 90 years I'm a new boy round the block and I need a bit of encouragement. I hope to speak to you again. I hope also to become familiar with your work.

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Frederick Nellist

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Jarrow on Tyne UK
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