DAVID GERARDINO

Rookie (9/19/1963)

A Playground Of Hierarchies - Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

A playground of hierarchies,
where clouds look like friends,
and the sun a great big spit ball,
and you with a straw, .
A spectacle of weirdness and laughter,
and the moon, a colourful weave of
particles that sprout from a echo
of love, and freedoms that make or
break us all.


Comments about A Playground Of Hierarchies by DAVID GERARDINO

  • (7/31/2006 3:02:00 AM)


    Hi David, It's nice to see something new. Nice poem I really enjoyed it and very different. Take care. (Report) Reply

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  • (7/25/2006 2:34:00 PM)


    Finely Weaved yes indeed it was! This is so captivating, I could really understand the feeling in this
    Wonderfully writen
    Love duncan X
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/22/2006 12:55:00 AM)


    NOW YOU CAN DO A LOT WITH CLOUDS...GRACEFUL & SURREAL...
    I LIKE THIS, DAVID, AS YOU 9as usual0 PAINT THAT DREAMSCAPE OF MACABRE...STUNNING'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/22/2006 12:54:00 AM)


    NOW YOU CAN DO A LOT WITH CLOUDS...GRACEFUL & SURREAL...
    I LIKE THIS, DAVID, AS YOU 9as usual0 PAINT THAT DREAMSCAPE OF MACABRE...STUNNIONG'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR
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  • (7/21/2006 6:17:00 PM)


    FOR A FRIEND I GROW UP WITH............... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 21, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 18, 2010


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