A Pledge For Deprivation Comments

A winner my friend. A wonderful piece structure in you inimitable style with a puch that feels like a kiss. This is a wonderful piece Nimal, portraying and quizzing the idea of change. Great piece my frind.

The universal language of sorrow. How well you have defined that poverty of the human spirit that to some degree afflicts us all. You have spoken out very eloquently on behalf of these deprived people in your powerful poem. Ten from me, Nimal.

Hi Nimal! A thoughtful poem that could apply to many circumstances, and loved the metaphor. :)