A Poem I Wrote Poem by jasmin bell

A Poem I Wrote

Rating: 4.7


you see them everywhere,
sitting on a bench, sharing a chair,
it kind of makes me sad,
it makes me think how your so glad,
to be away from me
despite all of my calls and pleas,
i can't take it out on other people,
that would be wrong,
and im definatley not writing a song,
i no i shouldnt keep it bottled inside,
i shouldn't run, i shouldn't hide,
but its not my fault, its just me,
we'll just see what happens, shall we?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 07 December 2009

a poem that speaks...and speaks its heart out...hi there, r u listening? good piece Jasmin...frank and expreesive...10

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its melodious and all.. i like it Jazzy

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Shelly Shelly 21 September 2009

nicely have corelated ur pain n poems..

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Shekhar Joshi 07 September 2009

i liked the ending the most.......your pain can be felt.......nicely written....... good one........

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Surya . 06 September 2009

a very beautiful and deep poem.liked it a lot. voted10 surya

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