jasmin bell

I Hope - Poem by jasmin bell

i thought i wouldn't fall again, I thought this was the last time,
but now, of course, i am going to rhyme,
about how you stole my heart from the very start,
he left me there in tears,
you took away all of my fears of falling in love again,
with you my heart started to mend,
I thought I could handle just being your friend,
but now that he is gone, now that I only have you,
I hope that you love me too.

Comments about I Hope by jasmin bell

  • Allemagne Roßmann (12/28/2009 1:30:00 AM)

    In feathers of love
    Flew the ray of a hope
    In girdle of a man
    Blew the rhapsody of a white dove
    Saw she her antelope its not him coz he is gone
    It is no more fears coz they flapped away
    With pristine dropp of tears
    Its here, yeah over there............it wharfed
    Ah! I am blinded
    In the citadel of him
    His cyrus love awaits
    the breath of my veins
    Warmth of his love flows
    in butterflies -
    i paint them blue
    when i have his no clue
    Dab them red when am afraid
    Feel the myriad plunge of a squashed orange
    First time i say yes oh yes the sky, this sky
    my sky is so blue............in feathers of love
    in feathers of my love............

    Wonderful write-10 cheers.Ray
    Do read my A Christmas-singing her soprano
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  • (12/27/2009 9:50:00 PM)

    Interesting poem. A girl finds a man to replace the heartbreak of losing a man. The rhyme scheme was good, as was the timing. A sound poem, but it didn't do anything remarkable either.7/10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2009 11:11:00 PM)

    are you in love? who is the dude? aw usual good melodic piece (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2009 4:03:00 AM)

    Wow very beautiful, i swear this poem is very nice. im looking forward and im so eager to read more... Keep this up girl! :) <3 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 21, 2009

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