Seema Jayaraman

Gold Star - 14,440 Points (24 Aug / Mumbai)

A Poem Is Born (Abridged) - Poem by Seema Jayaraman

Words drum a rising tempo
synchronized, a million neurons
Pulsate, abuzz like a beehive disturbed

Tepid waves lapping a river bank, meditate
awaiting release of water upstream - a roar
announces an incoming tsunami - a poem is born.

Copyright ©Seema Jayaraman, Mumbai 21Sep2015

Topic(s) of this poem: poem

Form: Haiku


Comments about A Poem Is Born (Abridged) by Seema Jayaraman

  • Valsa George (9/28/2015 11:59:00 PM)


    This is a wonderful write Seema! As Rajnish sir has said, the right choice of words has made it a poem of pleasurable read! A 10 (Report) Reply

    Seema Jayaraman Seema Jayaraman (9/29/2015 4:18:00 AM)

    Thank you M'am...am stilling grappling with the technicalities of Haiku..

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  • Rajnish Manga (9/21/2015 1:08:00 PM)


    A wonderful choice of words and their soft music coupled with an imagery coming right from the heart of nature make this amazing poem a pleasure to read. Thanks. A quote:
    Pulsate, abuzz like a beehive disturbed.... announces an incoming tsunami - a poem is born.
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    Seema Jayaraman Seema Jayaraman (9/21/2015 9:45:00 PM)

    thank you, amazing how words can be strung together to create pictures

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 21, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 21, 2015


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