Rainbow Magik On Wall - Haiku Poem by Seema Jayaraman

Rainbow Magik On Wall - Haiku

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Sunrise drum windows
dancing thru crystal chimes
few million rainbows
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Copyright ©Seema Jayaraman, Mumbai 4Oct2015 All Rights Reserved

Sunday, October 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: rainbow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 October 2015

Amazing imagery is drawn here. Really wonderful sunrise drums the window. Interesting sharing....10

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Seema Jayaraman 05 October 2015

Thank you Kumarmaniji, my imagination is going at overdrive these days..

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 August 2016

Wow..That's the wonderful Haiku with few million rainbows. I just wonder. Loved it.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 November 2015

Sometimes through prisms of a glass windows, sometimes through bubbles of the surfing soap, someone in a dress of seven colors, semi transparent, she descends from skies, snd dances like Manika before my sight, I try to become Vishwamitra for her, but whenever I tried to capture her, she starts playing hide and seek, disappears, re-appears, untill my wife knocks at the doors, You are taking too much time in a bath, now please come out and spare it for me. And when I reply, you mean Manika? She exclaims, Who is Manika! Your lovely poem inspired to write these lines as my comment.

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Seema Jayaraman 17 November 2015

Thank you Akhtarji, happy my short haiku has elicited such a sweet poem and the ethereal Manika.. thank you for your kind comment.

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Bri Edwards 12 November 2015

so i finally looked for magik in Google and found: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ma·gick noun noun: magick chiefly archaic spelling of magic. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - so maybe that was on your mind? bri :) p.s. i now see your response below. i don't know if such responses come to me as a message; i hadn't read it until now. :)

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Bri Edwards 10 November 2015

i counted a 1,000,001. is there magic in spelling it magik? ? hee-hee. bri ;) :)

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Seema Jayaraman 10 November 2015

Yes absolutely. A teeny lil tweak to the regular and ordinary creates magik! ! Let the counting go..enjoy the magik! ! Thank you Bri.

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Charl Cilliers 09 November 2015

Practise with the haiku form, Seema. It will exercise your powers of imagery and economy of expression. Best wishes Charl

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Seema Jayaraman 09 November 2015

Thank you Sir, will continue working on haiku and improve my understanding and grasp on this unique form of expression. Looking forward to more visits and comments from you for my other poems.

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