A Poem Named-“just A Thought” Poem by Rehan Hyder

A Poem Named-“just A Thought”

Rating: 4.2


I wish the laws and norms
of this strait jacket land
had malleability some
I would’ve made love
to your poem
predictability of pleasure
beads over its nude expression
I would’ve dwelt some life times
in limbo, indecision, buffer
of hoisted civility and
glowing morbidity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 25 June 2009

Amazing composition, wonderful.

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Aamnah Akhtar 25 June 2009

dont know why your write brought a picture of the auroras and comet-streaks across the night sky... loved the pain trickling underneath it...lovely as ever.

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