I found your panties
tangled in
my sheets
and
laughed at the
ironic justice
of that:
You just three days
gone
but gone I
knew
forever.
And your panties
tangled in
my sheets
I jotted that line down
and for 17 years
I moved it
from
note book
to
notebook.
I never did that line justice.
But then,
I never did your love justice
either
7/9/00
great Ending, and I don't know about Bukowski, but your voice shines through. Good Job
this is a fabulous poem...and wow, to be compared to Bukowski! Wonderful! onto my favorites it goes.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Greta Sommerville? George Weeks?