A Question Poem by Richard Quinby

A Question

Rating: 5.0


Was my drinking,
What I fondly call
My disease,
A dam blocking
A river of words?
They do
Seem
To come faster
And clearer now.
Is it just a
Deep dark lake
Released and rushing
Out
Leaving a muddy bottom,
Littered with stumps and trash,
To dry in the hot summer sun?
Or will it reveal
Some hidden spring
Flowing on forever
Pure water sparkling in the sun
Forming small dark pools
Here and there
Feeding parched arid lands?

8/6/05

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Osborne 06 October 2005

Great, Great, Great! ! The best one of yours that I have read yet.10++

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Lylyanna Pilewski 05 October 2005

Good one ya know they say when you're drunk youir true thoughts and feeling come to a surface. Lylyanna

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Mary Nagy 03 September 2005

I have faith that there's that 'hidden spring flowing on forever'....This is a wonderful poem Richard. Sincerely, Mary

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