A Portrait Poem by Xelam Kan™

A Portrait

Rating: 5.0


Took
some sparkling tears
from her eyes fair-
to paint
'my love'
on
her dimples sore,
with kisses four,
like
the twinkling STARS
in moonless nights
paint the sky.

Thursday, January 9, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rahman Henry 17 January 2014

Heart-melting, nice to read. a beauty of sadness and sigh. Thanks a lot to share. wishes, dear poet.

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Bright Morn 09 January 2014

short but beautiful. I like the beat and smooth flow of the poem. really nice

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 January 2014

lovely imagery, a wonderful poem!

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