A Preet Paradise Poem by Doris Cornago

A Preet Paradise

Rating: 5.0


Morning comes on wings
Here's my early thing
Leisurely breathing
Landscape rolling
Tasks on teacup
Teaspoon ticks
Taxing tocks
Timid trips
Tireless
Tyrant
Soon
Hello
Bellows
Deed undone
Crushed cookies
On blueberry blues
Whole wheat waffles
Preet paradise ruined
Fork freaking out sliced
Tea is getting stone cold
Waffle wafting put on hold
Sharpshooter setup snagged
Rally's roast, relocate roost

A Preet Paradise
Wednesday, July 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: choice,imagination,lifespan,lifestyle,survival
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life is truly good when you have the advantage of imagination and a poet's skills. You cannot be defeated with the realities of life such as being employed by a tyrant. You learn to survive and plan something sinister alongside. One precaution, don't let your imagination get in the way of work. Abort before you are tracked down. Deny all knowledge and move on.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 12 July 2018

Such an inspiring write, Doris..10++++

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Doris Cornago 12 July 2018

It's a complaint but yes, inspiring. Thank you for your lofty thoughts, bro. Bernard.

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Doris Cornago 11 July 2018

Survival is venting your frustrations on something edible because you are able to masticate, swallow and it's good for you. You can detect the change of emotions in the shape of the poem - starting out as majestic and well formed, the poem peters out to slow dwindling quiet protest. Poeming is my therapy and my survival in the drudgery of work.

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