Rodney vali

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A Pretty Beauty - Poem by Rodney vali

I once saw a girl,
She saw me.
I watched her for a bit,
She was looking back at me.
Our eyes crossed.
She has beautiful eyes,
Beautiful grey-blue eyes.
I was looking at her,
Seeing the beauty she is.
Looking at her pretty eyes,
And her beautiful hair.
She looked back at me.
We met,
We started talking.
She was really kind,
And really beautiful.
She made me feel important,
Like someone cared for me.
This made me happy,
Cause I didn't feel like that.
I felt alone for a long time,
Now I don't feel alone anymore.
Thanks to this pretty girl.
Now I'm talking to her a lot,
And we have fun.
She's beautiful,
I like her.
I don't know what she thinks of me,
And I'm wondering,
Will she ever go out with me?


Comments about A Pretty Beauty by Rodney vali

  • Tammie Aimson (6/5/2012 1:50:00 PM)


    This is such a beautiful poem and if that girl ever read this i think she will love you forever i no i would xx (Report) Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (4/22/2012 3:17:00 PM)


    Impressive! Hey Rodney! Nobody knows, especially if she gets the chance to read this beautiful poem! In the World of possibilities, anything is possible! Only Time Will Tell like I said in my poem titled: Only Time Will Tell! Your poetic talent is clearly shown in this well crafted write! 10+++ WELCOME to the Poetry World! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 22, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, May 14, 2012


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