Henry Brown

Rookie - 22 Points (31 July 1947 / Johannesburg South Africa)

A Problem With My Mobile Phone - Poem by Henry Brown

Have you been having problems and feeling the pain
Dropping calls again and again

Speaking to clients and not hearing a word
Then having to use your land line, it’s really absurd

It all started a while back with the big big crash
Seems to me customer care really means care for the cash

Words don’t count if you don’t back them up
Actually your service really does suck

I had my phone in for a 10 day “repair”
Only to find it useless in the 2nd big big crash scare

Not a word of apology from the big profit cats
But then I am just one of the stats

Losing business but still have to pay
Whether the network is working each night and day

After the “repair” the quality is still bad
Are you experiencing the problems I’ve had

Maybe it’s time to get some direction
And join up with the better connection

Or even join the smaller cell c
Who could not give worse service I’m sure you will agree

Dropping calls, swapping callers not hearing people on the phone
Surely must give us reason to moan

But it looks like my service provider does listen or not believe in customer care at all
If you have the same problems please give me a call

Or send this poem to all in your address book
I will do the same as to well as to the Sunday times, The Star news papers and the Morning Mail to have look

BY HENRY BROWN 200506


Comments about A Problem With My Mobile Phone by Henry Brown

  • (2/18/2010 12:57:00 PM)


    You can say not a hope in hell
    If you phone brakes down.
    Or do or die..
    What is the point in having a phone if it breaks down all the time..
    The pay phone will always work better than you phone.
    The modern technology is not always user friendly.
    Maybe the phone is having enough of you..
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  • Adam Reed (2/12/2010 12:14:00 AM)


    hahahahahahhaha! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! dude u must have been either really pissed off with ur phone or insanely bored rofl. pretty cool rhymes i might add lol (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 11, 2010



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